This is the version I sent you. We talked about how the lightness of the left side didn’t anchor the image well, and about the hot building and cloud about 1/3 of the way from the right. Also that not-quite-clone in the lower left. While you were talking I was thinking “But I did, I did….”
This is the one I meant to send - I had already printed and framed it. I’m thinking I had addressed the comments you made on the other one. Agree?
We talked about camera movement with film vs. digital. I referred to one in our conversation as film, but I was mistaken. Those below are film. I have felt that film was less susceptible to an attack of the jitters, but have yet to attain enough consistency to substantiate it. Looking at our most recent collections, I’ve exposed quite a bit of film on these without much quantity to show for it. The last one was made on the same shoot as the first one, but you’ve not seen it before; I continue to shoot film trying to see more like the first one.
